In the main I’m genuinely please with the feedback from my tutor. Even though I have already completed the introductory module of EYV I still feel as though I’m finding my feet with regard to some areas of academia. I’m also mindful of the fact that I took perhaps, too long to complete the first module and need to make sure I stick to the allotted timeframes for completion of this first level. I take on board Matthew’s comments regarding engaging with critical analysis rather than description when it come to researching other photographers. If I had more time I would complete extra research and add it to my learning log but I have to balance that with other areas of study and running a business, it’s essential to me to complete the course, so maybe, sometimes, I have to sacrifice certain aspects to stay on track with my timings. There are many positives from his feedback and plenty of areas for me to improve on.
Assignment 1: Tutor Feedback
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